Thursday 2 March 2017

The Cactus

It was hot in the desert. Mel was with Meg trying to find some water because they had discovered that if you cut open a cactus it gives you water. After a while they had found two cactus standing in a line. They looked at each other, they decided to cut them all so they had a big water bottle full. However when they cut it open it was all yellow on the inside. It was so remarkable that Mel fell on a cactus and was very sore, so next time she sits down she will sit down very gingerly.

1 comment:

  1. Well done on your entry this week Lucy. I like how you have used the prompt words in your story. I bet that Mel will be careful around cacti in future!
    Keep up the great work.
    Ms Brennock
    Team 100 w/c
    Dublin
    https://msbrennocksclass.100wc.net/

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